Thursday, May 13, 2010

deadlock

Left alone in the dreaded dome,
I hear your voice through the shiny hole
I seek you there, amidst the glow,

No…!! It’s not you on the road….



Your train of thoughts follows me,
I want to run away, but I let it be.
Being with you, is the last thing I want,
And yet I can’t seem to move on.

5 comments:

AJ said...

nice nice.. like

ApaarG said...

great work.. 'simply' beautiful!

baavriviti said...

"Being with you, is the last thing I want,
And yet I can’t seem to move on."

love it.

Sanjeev Mishra said...

Once a man saw his friend standing in a lonely place ,he walked near him and said:"I saw u alone so thought to give u a company."
Friend replied:"No my dear,I was with me but now U have made me alone."

Untill we r not with us, no one can fill the emptiness within us and we feel this world; a dreaded dome;

explore urself try to be with u and then u will find that this whole world need u but u dont need any one.
try to hear ur own voice,try to seek ur own inner if u realy want to feel the real life.

BTW the lines r very touchy and they made me disturbed and also forced me to give u a hint which may lead to a real;joyful and painless path.
god bless u.

nikita said...

dis one is awesome yaar.........