Tuesday, July 27, 2010

escape

At the corner of a street,
I saw a shadow, that I started to follow,
It went for a mile, and then turned wild,
It went left, it went right, it went haywire, then turned bright,
I followed it everywhere, expecting it to show me the way,
Until I was drowned, in its pool, where I knew I couldn’t stay.

I ran mindlessly, wherever I could find a light,
I knew I had to fight...to survive.

I found a spot…cold, but bright,
And I stood there for a fierce fight.

The lights casted several shadows of me on the ground,
I think, to make me realize…I can’t escape my downs.

6 comments:

AJ said...

you are writing too good yaar!!
Too good

nikita said...

yeh tune likha hai..........sachi muchi.....

baavriviti said...

beautiful expression of feelings :)

Unknown said...

Very Nice RJ.. very impressive

Unknown said...

You are searching for the light which is so bright,
You are searching for hope which even makes me delight.
The light was searching you not to show ur down side,
The light wants to ESCAPE you from your darkness aside.
It says "Oh !! Dear dont go in dark, even your shadow will leave you,
When you will be in ur down, your shadow(you) wil be the one who will never betray you".
People will come n pass by but You will always be the resilient force to fight for you,
So try not to hide in dark but be someone's light so that he can see his shadow in you.

delhidreams said...

keen sense of existentialism!
hmmmm
do write more. n do share d link wen u do :)